Monday, February 20, 2017

Holiday Challenge

HOLIDAY CHALLENGE

At the start of term we did a holiday challenge. The challenge involved using our senses and writing about them. This is my one for jumping off rocks into a lake.

I heard Max counting down from ten.

I heard my dad telling me not to stick out my tongue.


I saw how high I was on the rocks.


I felt the strong wind blowing against my cold face.


I felt the warm rocks on my cold feet.


I wondered how deep the water was underneath me.


I wondered if I would be able to jump.
                         
Comments are welcome

3 comments:

  1. Great poem Louis. What lake were you at?

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  2. Louis good poem, that would be so much FUN!!!!

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