HOLIDAY CHALLENGE
At the start of term we did a holiday challenge. The challenge involved using our senses and writing about them. This is my one for jumping off rocks into a lake.
At the start of term we did a holiday challenge. The challenge involved using our senses and writing about them. This is my one for jumping off rocks into a lake.
I heard Max counting down from ten.
I heard my dad telling me not to stick out my tongue.
I saw how high I was on the rocks.
I felt the strong wind blowing against my cold face.
I felt the warm rocks on my cold feet.
I wondered how deep the water was underneath me.
I wondered if I would be able to jump.
Comments are welcome
Great poem Louis. What lake were you at?
ReplyDeletehi Bernie, lake Aviemore.
DeleteLouis good poem, that would be so much FUN!!!!
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